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Products of our own design?
Contributed by
wolfman
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 06:33:46 PM in AEST
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Products of our own design?
They say that we are all products of our own design
What were they thinking to have this thought transpire?
Why is it thought that if you live one way?
They say that’s how you want to stay
I don’t think it's that easy at all
And in them saying that they did set up their fall
They only see what they think is there
But for what is true they don’t really care
I don’t want to live like this
To have so much of life that I miss
Suicide seems to be my only hope
But if I do then how will my family and friends cope
To take my life would stop all my pain
But that would mean never seeing them again.
This is not the design I chose for me
But for some reason this is how I be
So with this pain I guess i'll live
And of myself I will give
And to those who think they can tell
I say to you go to hell.
“How am I supposed to cope?”
He thinks
“I guess I’ll write about it.”
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wolfman
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Re: Products of our own design?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 06:41:08 PM AEST
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| Interesting thoughts and good poem. Thanks for writing. Cheers! |
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Re: Products of our own design?
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:29:52 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this. Thankyou for sharing. Much peace. |
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Re: Products of our own design?
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by Crimson_Valley on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:01:00 PM AEST
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| So good. Very much like how I feel. I love it so much. |
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Re: Products of our own design?
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:36:38 PM AEST
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| josh, please dont ask for comments, they need to to be asked of. your poems deserve them. |
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Re: Products of our own design?
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:27:25 PM AEST
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An awesome poem, very awesome. I can relate to this. I hope you feel better.
Spazzo |
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Re: Products of our own design?
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:46:15 PM AEST
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I like this. A bit more angst that usual with you, and 'tis a good thing.
Well done.
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Re: Products of our own design?
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:31:43 PM AEST
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I liked this one mucho. I can't place my finger on what I liked about it, so you'll have to take my word for it.
Take care.
David
P.S. And Andrew, it's mostly a moo-cow. |
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