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Behind A Waterfall
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have always had a fantasy,
it involves a waterfall
as far as the eye can see.
And a man,
a gorgeous man,
who loves me with his lips
and makes love with his hips.
The love we could make,
would be filled with passion and mist,
I am not like any other,
for he will remember he was kissed.
As the water would shoot down from he top,
the dream would never end,
the dream would never stop.
I'd touch every inch of his body
with all of the love that I held,
as I'd love him even harder,
he'd say, "I love you" as he yelled.
As he'd say, "I love you"
with water dripping down like rain,
I realized we would be, in essence,
in the same dimension,
and our love would never change.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-12-10 17:00:00]
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Re: Behind A Waterfall
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by Cathie on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 08:17:45 PM AEST
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| Nice job! Very well-written. |
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Re: Behind A Waterfall
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 09:32:22 PM AEST
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I think I've had the same dream... lol
Nice write!! |
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Re: Behind A Waterfall
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:43:37 PM AEST
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You've given me the image of glistening, wriggling, trembling with desire bodies here Candice,
Thankyou for this, I do remember what this was like, I think I must've seen it in a film somewhere before. But we won't go into that!!hehehe
Very well written mental imagery, I like very much. Velly sexy indeed!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Behind A Waterfall
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:48:40 PM AEST
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Dean, although I did mean for the poem to give the mental image that it has given you, it is really one of my biggest fantasies. I wouldn't mind living this particular fantasy with Shadow. I really don't know why but it has been my fantasy for as long as I can remember. I am glad that you have enjoyed it.
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Re: Behind A Waterfall
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:04:54 PM AEST
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Yes I did enjoy it, for it's a very good write!
So then Candice you know what to do, you're an intelligent, good, honest lady, you of all people can make it work like your wishes!
I have to go now Candice, it's been a pleasure sharing thoughts with you again as always.
I wish you pleasant dreams that'll be reality soon for You and Shadow both.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Behind A Waterfall
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:08:48 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad you liked it so much, this one is one of those from my private poems, but I wanted to share this one.
I hope to talk to ou again soon. And I plan on making my dreams of Shadow reality for us both. Sweet dreams
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Re: Behind A Waterfall
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:58:42 PM AEST
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