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Half Way Up the Wall
Contributed by
Curtisc
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:35:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've climbed half way up this wall,
and I can't look down now.
I'll have to start all over again if I fall,
and that's something I just can't allow.
I have to keep moving ahead,
even if I can't be with you.
This feeling inside isn't easy to shed,
but it's something that I have to do.
Deep down I want to wait and see,
wait for that chance of a lifetime.
But in reality I don't think it'll be,
so it's this wall I continue to climb.
It seems to get taller with every passing day,
I would think it would be the other way around.
When I think of you it begins to sway,
but I can't let the pain knock me down.
I know when I get to the top there's still the other side,
but going down just can't compare.
At that point I'm going to have to decide,
exactly where do I go from there.
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Re: Half Way Up the Wall
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:08:42 PM AEST
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verry nice poem, and great insight, wish u luck in your quest . . .
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Re: Half Way Up the Wall
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:18:02 AM AEST
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your really good please feel free to comment me
(and please if its not a poblem could you read and let me
know whats wrong with "keep going")
thank you
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Re: Half Way Up the Wall
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:12:12 PM AEST
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| I know how hard it could be to start over just after having broken up with someone you still love dearly. Great write. |
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