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Determination
Contributed by
fielding88
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:32:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I’ll stand up for the worthy cause.
I’ll bear the cross upon my shoulders.
Put an end to hateful laws,
Because this world cant get much colder.
I’m not like the rest of you.
I don’t hide my face in the darkness.
I’ll do what I always knew
Would lead us to happiness.
Don’t follow someone’s word,
Let yourself be heard.
Fulfill your own desires.
Don’t follow someone’s lead,
You know what you need.
Inner strength is what inspires
I’ll protect the sick and helpless.
The faintest cry I wont ignore.
Life’s too short to be too cautious,
So I’d do these things and more.
I promise to the world,
I’ll do these things I say.
I’ll promise to the world,
But let someone else lead the way…
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fielding88
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2005-02-08 16:32:29]
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Re: Determination
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by CodyJ on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:37:18 PM AEST
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| Amen. kudos. |
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Re: Determination
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by _myonlyone_ on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:43:38 PM AEST
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i likes it.
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Re: Determination
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by breny on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:36:24 PM AEST
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Inner strength is what inspires
No truer words Marc. Great poem. I liked it a lot :-D
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Determination
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:49:30 PM AEST
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Good write... wise words..
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Re: Determination
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:19:44 PM AEST
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Isn't this the truth. Now, more than ever, I think, determination is needed, to get out of the apathetic prison so many have locked themselves in, and fulfill Life, and Destiny. Well done, this poem, and beautiful, the message it conveys.
Walk in the Light.
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Re: Determination
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:50:17 PM AEST
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Brilliant, thought provoking and inspirational. I love it *grins*
Take care
- Becca |
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Re: Determination
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:08:05 PM AEST
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Phenominal!! Absolutely wonderful, this was excellent Marc. The concept was comepletely and utterly amazing the ending was brilliant, and a good tie in to the beginning (which was also phenominal) the whole thing flowed so nicely and the message held a little story to it and .. it ws just wonderful!
All praise, great write!
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