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Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
Contributed by
dawny
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:11:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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She hides within a heart of gold
And tries to hide her tears
Watching people walk on by
Confirming her worst fears
Loneliness consumes her
She aches to just belong
Find someone who will love her
Help save her from alone
But her heart she hides within
Not ready to emerge
An angel who’s forgotten
And lost within her world
She lives her life for others
Helping those she can
Hoping that against all odds
Her dreams will soon begin
Copyright ©
dawny
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2005-02-08 07:11:18]
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:21:18 AM AEST
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I have missed your poetry. This was very enjoyable. Sad, but sweet, and ending with such hope.
Stitch |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:32:08 AM AEST
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I have also missed your poems Dawny, I loved this one, it was so well written
pix xx *hugs* |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:34:40 AM AEST
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You and me both, dawny.
Spike |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:27:29 AM AEST
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It’s so good to see you back Dawny, this was so well written. I can relate to it very much. All the sadness and emotions you’ve poured here was really outstanding. Brilliant ending as well
Hugs,
Jane x
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by craz2 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:28:23 AM AEST
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| really good. i enjoyed this. sometimes we tend to do more fro all around us. then our own dreams get put off. a |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:23:19 AM AEST
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| Anoyher expressive write. Good words. Blessings. |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 02:09:29 AM AEST
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| Great write. I really enjoyed reading this piece. :-) |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by AliB on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:17:54 PM AEST
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Great write Dawny,
This could easily be written by me, exactly how I feel most of the time, hopefully my dreams will become real soon!
Love Ali xxxxx |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 07:46:10 AM AEST
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I think of hope as a lasso that tries to rope our dreams. Sometimes it takes a while but hope is the key.
I loved your poem and the meaning.
It just shined.
Kie |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by took3nails on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:14:26 AM AEST
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| Your a great writer, Why are there only two poems. |
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:42:11 PM AEST
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Aww, Im love this piece Dawn.
I hate to say it, but I relate to it, too.
Especially that last stanza.
This is a gorgeous write my friend, though it somehow makes me sad.
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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