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Earthquake
Contributed by
adsalamon
on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Earthquake
Tearing up a delicate path
Destroying all; shows no fear
Lava flowing
Melting, suffocating
Erupting from below
The deep white canyon
Sprawled across skin
Hiding place for hate
Eruption; the release
Land, scarred for life
Hate subsides; shame the survivor
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adsalamon
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2002-12-10 13:00:00]
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Re: Earthquake
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:01:50 PM AEST
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| i don't want to read into this all too deep, but it sounds like there's a ton of underlying meanings here relating to the soul of people... good write! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Earthquake
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by Patterz on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:17:02 PM AEST
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| I am a survivor of SI and finally someone has been able to put what cutting actually does for you because the outside world just doesn't seem to understand. Awsome work.....im quite impressed....i don't understand why this poem hasn't been read more often then it has...because it truely hits home with me and i am sure with many other people aswell.... |
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