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Untitled
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:35:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I set sail
on a Sea of Silence
to listen to the waves
as they tell the tales
of how it used to be.
My own voice gets lost in the loud roar
of waves and noise,
noises of the past.
Stories lost on the rocks
of the Siren shores,
some tales meet thier final doom.
I cast my sail of paper and pen
to giude me to my peace of mind
and avoid the sultry call.
To be alone in the vast Ocean
of one's own mind,
to recall those days of pleasure and pain,
I find myself and lose it again
in the romance of being a writer.
Copyright ©
Nardo
... [
2005-02-08 04:35:28]
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Re: Untitled
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:11:29 AM AEST
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| Very whimsical and different from your others. Nice one, Nardo. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Untitled
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by nanonan on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:13:10 AM AEST
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| What else can be said? Your story is so complete, and so vivid, in an abstract way, that I can not help but wonder... I see the devotion, but the void that is uncertainty... I believe that this was very well written, and I think that no editing or improvement is needed. It is a beautiful story the way it is. |
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