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would you

Contributed by Hooker on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:01:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

"would you?"
what would you say if i died today,
would you tell of happy times and smiles that passed,
would you stand in front of all my family and pass your condolences,
would you weep as they closed the casket?

would you you bring me my favorite things to burry with me,
would you get me my camels, my redbull and vodka,
would you leave me a note, leave me a book?
what would you do if i died today?

would you wear the ring I gave you for christmas that year,
would you wear it on your right ring finger as a memory,
would you make sure the ankle braclets stayed on?
would you miss me tomarrow if I went away?

And would you break down and confess your love?
would you tell me all the things you never said,
would you kiss my eyes and tell me good bye?
would you bring me back for just a day?

would you wipe my tears and tell me theres no time,
would you hold me in your arms and let me pass on,
would you be there for me when my life is gone,
would you help my now if you could?

Copyright © Hooker ... [ 2005-02-08 03:01:41]
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Re: would you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:18:33 PM AEST
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wow.
that was really powerful.
I like it a lot.

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