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Without You
Contributed by
Jenn2004
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 01:17:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Everything has changed since youre not around,
and i live in emptiness now,
I look for you, but youre nowhere to be found,
Im living my life without you, im living my life without you,
I miss all the things we did before,
but you dont come around any more,
Im living my life without you, im living my life without you,
I still listen to all your favorite songs,
I cry when i hear them, and i cant believe that your gone,
I still think about the times we would drink and laugh the night away,
I always laughed at the crazy things that you would say,
My feelings never changed for you,
im still holding on to your words,
like i use to do,
Im living my life without you, Im living my life without you,
Guys come and go, and memories fade away,
and im still hoping you will come back to me one day,
Im still living my life my without you, im still living my life without you,
I loved you before we were together and after we were through,
I never felt this way for anybody else but you,
Im still holding on to your words ,
like i use to do,
And im still living my life without you, without you
Copyright ©
Jenn2004
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2005-02-08 01:17:10]
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Re: Without You
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:51:17 AM AEST
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Good to see you posting again, Jenn.
This is so sad but so well written..
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Re: Without You
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:40:33 PM AEST
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Very well written and very emotional write. Felt very sad, yet a theme of inner strength and getting on with your life.
Super write, well done
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Re: Without You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:18:42 AM AEST
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| This really in an excellent write. The line repetition works well. Great job. :-) |
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