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Betrayed
Contributed by
Tobe
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I believed every word you said
The words are still rushing through my head
It felt like I knew you for a lifetime
But all I found is that you lied
Now I find myself betrayed again
No more energy left to pretend
You told me you loved me
But how can this be?
You never had any respect for me
You just used me when you pleased
You tore my emotions apart
And left me with a bleeding heart
I really thought you were a true friend
But it was always about you in the end
I found out that you don't seem to care
These are feelings that I just can't bare
Now I find myself betrayed again
No more energy left to pretend
You told me you loved me
But how can this be?
You told me everything about you
But everything you said was never true
I should have trusted my instincts
And left you before this could all sink in
I still can't figure this out in my mind
Why did you have to do this to me?
Now I can't even look into your eyes
I wish that you would just leave
Now I find myself betrayed again
No more energy left to pretend
You told me you loved me
But how can this be?
Cause I try and push you away
And make myself clean
To soothe all of the pain
And forget that you hurt me
Copyright ©
Tobe
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2005-02-07 23:24:53]
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Re: Betrayed
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:40:48 PM AEST
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| Raw with emotions, words venting full of feeling, excellent poem. |
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Re: Betrayed
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by jjones12 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:13:10 AM AEST
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well it's another long one but it's great. i really think it is! Great write!
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Re: Betrayed
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by DeathChild on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:35:31 AM AEST
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| Welcome to the world of love. Good words |
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Re: Betrayed
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:51:47 AM AEST
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Been there i've felt it all, sad emotions i will always have, this was powerfull Toby love it.
Jane x |
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