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falling into a black hole
Contributed by
catz77
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:15:05 PM in AEST
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as i walk myself through life
i notice somthing along the path
there is a small knife
almost unnoticeable
i picked it up
what harm would it do
then i started to run
for fear that some one was watching my every step
i was afraid for the very 1st time
i could here it
it was comming closer
it chased me into a trap
it was so dark
i couldnt even feel myself
i had no emotions
i was as cold as ice
shivering i thought i was gonna make it . . .
then i remembered the knife
so i ended up taking my own life
i regret it now
im still lost
before i thought it wasnt well
but now . . .
im in hell
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Re: falling into a black hole
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by Crimson_Valley on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:47:58 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, it's really powerful and you chose good choice words. |
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Re: falling into a black hole
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:46:39 PM AEST
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| Deep and raw, emotions flowing excellent poem. |
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Re: falling into a black hole
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by vanilla_flame on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 06:00:25 PM AEST
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very powerful, good write
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