|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Cold Spell
Contributed by
Psyche
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:24:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
|
I try to write as scheduled
In verse, in rhyme, in tone
But cannot for the life of me
Find a “voice” I own
In aiming for simplicity
My verse is short and blunt
Need have I to triumph fear
And plural syllables confront
And yea, when darkness overtakes
My ruminating mind
It corresponds with best ideas
I’ve searched all day to find
Then morning’s dawn reminds me
Of the sonnet s I’ve expressed
And I rush to write them down
I find….they’re all repressed.
*Sigh*
Copyright ©
Psyche
... [
2005-02-07 21:24:56]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:35:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The title tugged at me, the verses drew me in. Well written.
~T |
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:56:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You'd be surprised how unique you really are.
Well done, my friend. |
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:22:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is a very well written poem
i really like it.
elizabeth (catz77) |
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:23:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh! that I could write like this and call it struggling!!!!
THIS is terrific. Your "voice" is here. It is difficult, in my opinion, to recognize one's own voice... but it grows louder in time, I think.
Keep writing,
SNM |
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:36:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Honestly Psyche, I felt like this was a joy to read because it *was* so well and honestly expressed. I especially liked the second line of the first stanza "In verse, in rhyme, in tone." Almost sounds like you've been in my class at school Nice job!
|
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:44:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Awesome write...lacks nothing from where I sit...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:27:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I love the poem, especially the title of it. |
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:26:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I really liked this. It's very well written. Nice work. |
|
|
Re: Cold Spell
(User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:52:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow this was an amazing poem. You could tell this couldn't have been easy, yet not too difficult with your creative mind and beautiful insight. Love it! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
