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Broken Trust
Contributed by
mina-1
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:20:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I trusted you with all my heart
You abused my trust and broke me apart
I poured out my heart to you
Now I'm hurt and feeling blue
How could you do that to me
My inner thoughts I spoke out free
You gave me alot of attention
But that was a cover just the least to mention
I thought that you were nice
Behind that charade you broke the ice
You were a scheming, plotting, coniving soul
Who played with people's hearts was your goal
You abused me in such a way
I'm hurt, battered and nothing more to say
I thought that you were a true friend
I'll be disillusioned right til the end
Someday someone will be so cruel to you
Leaving you heart broken, it's true
Never ever mess with anyone's life
Because you only cause bitter strife
Listen to what I have to say
One day you'll be a loser in every way.
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-02-07 21:20:32]
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Re: Broken Trust
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:35:25 PM AEST
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" My Inner Thoughts I Spoke Out Free " don't
that just rip u up inside? i did that with some people my first time on this site and they nearly destroyed me, this is sad but a beautiful expression of emotions as only youcould write, beautifuly written i felt the pain within your plea, wish u well . . .
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Re: Broken Trust
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:13:24 PM AEST
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Wow..such a passionate write. I hope all is well with you... beautifully written
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Re: Broken Trust
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:06:27 PM AEST
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| well written i always enjoy your poetry |
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Re: Broken Trust
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:39:00 PM AEST
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SORRY THAT HAPPEND TO YOU. IT WAS A GOOD POEM THOUGH
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