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rejected angel
Contributed by
karmen
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:49:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Am I invisible?
Can you not see,
I’m laying right there,
yet you don’t notice me.
You always leave me,
In this pain.
Like I’m in the middle of a storm,
being hit by lightning and rain.
Angel, you say I am.
But you don’t really care.
You people don’t even see me,
I’m laying right there.
Look at what I did,
So empty and alone I was,
I guess now you see,
what no acknowledgement does.
I’m lying there, dead.
and yet you don’t look.
I can’t believe what I’ve done,
my own life, I took.
Now I wonder,
will heaven want me?
Or will I be stuck here on earth,
to roam for eternity.
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karmen
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2005-02-07 20:49:40]
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Re: rejected angel
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by sammydid on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:57:01 PM AEST
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| woah. super emotional. i give many props. but seriously, please dont do this in real life! you obviously have talent, keep on writing! |
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Re: rejected angel
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:00:43 PM AEST
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| Vivid imagination, I wonder if?? I've been told people who kill themselves may go to hell. I hope not because some people may not be in their right mind. Look at mine called Gene and Lucy Birdsone. |
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Re: rejected angel
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:44:48 PM AEST
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very touching is made my heart sink, I am deeply long that you dont do this your word are well used and the flow of this was steady if you were to leave us we would miss you, if is hard to deal with the thing of the life but they will pass. just be strong and keep faith you will be able to make it. God bless
I cant say that I know exatly where you are coming from but I cant tell wha tyour going through and just know that you are not alone, if we cant count on ourselves then we can count on each other okay. so if you need help just ask us will be here always. take care.
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Re: rejected angel
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:54:21 PM AEST
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i like this one to its good
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