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False Advertisement
Contributed by
stalkee
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:04:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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"False Advertisement"
I throw myself into harms way with every day that I attach this muzzle, I set myself up to shatter 'cause I am only a three day man it seems.
Cut the music, I've lost my head, cut the music, I've lost my head again.
Will you catch me now 'cause I've fallen in between and I'm lost in this again? Will you save me now 'cause I know you hate this too, so lets find out who I am.
Cut the music I've lost my head, cut the music I've lost my head again.
Even when it seems I finally win, I still lose, I've lost myself! Here I am to try and break through, but I can't, here's a sorry for you!
Pull the pins out of this doll and sew the pieces back together if you want. Or you can light it up and watch it go up in smoke if it's what pleases you.
Cut the music, I've lost my head, cut the music, I've lost my head again.
Please don't discard me, at least not yet. Please don't discard me, please don't discard me, please not yet.
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stalkee
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2005-02-07 20:04:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: False Advertisement
(User Rating: 1 ) by bonita2689 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:41:57 PM AEST (User
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Sounds like a song or at least lyrics. The feelings and emotions and the vocabulary was definitely there though to make it a poem. Nicely done. I like this... |
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