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Lord of The Dance of Life
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:59:29 PM in AEST
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Lord of the dance of life
May our drums always play your beat
Lord of the song of life
May we always sing your song
Lord of the Lilies in the field
May we always smell their sweet scent
Lord of the wind so fresh
May we always talk to you upon your breeze
Lord of the stars at night
May their beauty always astound
Lord of the dance of life
May we always feel your rhythm
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Re: Lord of The Dance of Life
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:12:44 PM AEST
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Lord, thank you for this poet and her endless words of wisdom. You are needed here now more than ever before my friend.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Lord of The Dance of Life
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:17:49 PM AEST
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| beautiful, I enjoyed every second...I wish I could write a prayer like this...fantastic |
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Re: Lord of The Dance of Life
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:48:08 PM AEST
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| This was beautiful, I think you could smack the reader even more with astonishment though if you threw in some rhyme, some poems dont do well with it but I think for this one it would give a lot of oomph...Wonderful write :) |
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Re: Lord of The Dance of Life
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by Stitch on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:07:42 PM AEST
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I can't tell you how much this means to me right now. I certainly needed to read this tonight and to feel this reassurance. It is lovely, encouraging, and worshipful.
Thank you for sharing it.
Stitch |
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Re: Lord of The Dance of Life
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:15:00 PM AEST
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This is amazing!! Awesome write.
Thank you.
Jenni |
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Re: Lord of The Dance of Life
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:29:31 AM AEST
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| Sooo beautiful..what a sweet poem..quite refreshing. :-) venkat |
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