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Just my thoughts.
Contributed by
wolfman
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:19:34 PM in AEST
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Just my thoughts.
As I stand high above the world
I see the cities where all the people do horde
I don’t know why they do
So I guess that it will remain a mystery to me and you
For those of you who find this confusing
I will explain and this thought I will be defusing
The world is so large there is so much space
But you all stay in one area making it a waste
The beauty of nature is so grand
But you see it as cities to be planed
The animals that are here in the fall
You see as trophies on the wall
All the rivers and lakes that are so remote
You see a place to take your boat.
All this is well and good
But take as many precautions that you should
Nature is not frail but rare
So of it all please do take care
For if it is wasted and gone
Then for its beauty we will forever long.
“I am not a tree huger.”
He pauses
“These are just some of my feelings.”
Copyright ©
wolfman
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Re: Just my thoughts.
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:43:51 PM AEST
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Good job wolfman... I laughed at the end :)
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Re: Just my thoughts.
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:43:31 PM AEST
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great poem. nicely written.
hope u had a great trip |
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Re: Just my thoughts.
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:34:21 PM AEST
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I quite agree. It's a wonder cities even exist, right?
... though I have seen you hug a tree on at least one occasion. Of course, so have I...
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Re: Just my thoughts.
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:28:14 PM AEST
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ME TOO!!! You ARE a tree hugger, I testify to it! And then you kissed it.
A good poem raising interesting thoughts on "Why am I here" (As opposed to not in the woods.)
Well, I'll see you for pizza. Andrew's buying.
take care.
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Re: Just my thoughts.
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:10:34 PM AEST
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| SWEET |
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Re: Just my thoughts.
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:01:40 PM AEST
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Definitely sweet! I'll be buying pizza on Monday. I'll see if we can get anybody from work in on the holy ceremony.
Take care
David |
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Re: Just my thoughts.
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:18:21 AM AEST
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Awesome poem about how out nature is disappearing... very well done! I especially liked the last stanza! You have true talent.
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