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Biting Love
Contributed by
solmyr1404
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 03:57:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ah, it is you.
It must be you,
For no one's love bites at my heart
Quite the same as yours.
You're [-] crazy,
You blood-thirsty vampire.
You know that you hold my heart in your hands.
Just for entertainment,
You attempt to suck my love for you
From my stolen heart,
But you can't.
Ha, ha, you [-]!
You can't hide!
I see your sharp, glistening fangs,
Glistening with my blood.
I smell you,
Smell your aroma,
The scent of a vampire, like that of a vnomous viper,
Maybe a cobra,
The aroma that only vampires can smell.
You thrive on love,
You cannot live without it.
Go ahead with your [-], God-forsaken blood-hunt.
Search all you want,
You murderous creature.
You'll never find it.
Only here is the heart
That can harbor love for the undead;
Only here is love for you,
Your life-blood.
Take it if you can.
You reek of venom, blood, and death,
As any and all vampires would.
Your teeth, your fangs,
Are stained with blood.
I shudder, I flinch
When your cold finger gently touches my neck.
I feel the death it causes.
With your long thumbnail,
You gently scratch my neck,
Gentle enough to arouse pleasure,
But still able to draw blood,
So much like the day we met,
When you scratched the surface of my heart
And caused my love for you to pour out.
You drank up all of it,
Pressing your warm, sensuous, blood-red lips
To my neck.
You purr from contentment,
Because you have what you've been searching for.
Once more, I smell your venom,
I hear your stealthy movements.
I feel a thirst....
Wait....
I smell an aroma
That only vampires smell,
I hear your moves,
I thirst for blood, love.
I feel venom, hatred, in my heart....
I look in a mirror.
Please....don't tell me I'm a....
Oh, [-]!!!!
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Re: Biting Love
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by Arsenic on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:01:34 PM AEST
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Love bites after all!
Hard for me to get through this, but I'm not a fan of freeverse. |
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Re: Biting Love
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by kailadragon on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:47:01 PM AEST
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| YES vampires, i have finally rubbed off on you...lol, jk, i love the imagery in this...its so...AWESOME!!!!!, lotsa luv, Kai |
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