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Blood Stain Tears
Contributed by
Bleeding_Nightmares
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:20:41 AM in AEST
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Blood Stain Tears
I feel the pain, feel it ever so deep,
Carved to bone, my blood does weep,
In anger a fist repetitively falls,
Breaching these emotionally starved walls,
What is love, but a blood stain between my thighs,
What is hate, just the tears I will forever cry.
By Bleeding_Nightmares
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Bleeding_Nightmares
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2005-02-07 10:20:41]
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by Stitch on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:54:11 AM AEST
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Talk about impact! This is a very effective write. Ouch. So full or stark pain and raw emotion. Nice work.
Stitch |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:55:21 AM AEST
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as real as one can be, beautiful? in it's own way yes, 4 there'll come a time when you'll be
2 much in love again ,2 remember y you wrote this 2 begin with . . . wish u well . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:21:31 AM AEST
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| short but really effective, i liked this a lot. very direct and powerful! x |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:45:56 PM AEST
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What a brilliant write, your words where so deep with feelings that one can't help but feel all the emotions you have writen down. An exeptionaly brilliant poem and i hope to see more of it soon.
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by arden on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 03:31:25 PM AEST
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short poem but wow... this was awesome.
i love the rhyme, the feelings and... well you get the idea
amazing write.
hope to see more.
Arden |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:06:07 PM AEST
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I envy your ability to say so much with so few words. I agree with the others -- this is quite impactful. And I, too, am drawn in... wishing that you might continue to write/post.
Thank you for sharing this-
~SNM~ |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:15:36 PM AEST
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WOW! This is awesome.... Really good write here..... Thank you for sharing your talent with us at YPDC..and a warm welcome here to this site..
Jenni |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:33:30 PM AEST
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I hate to use such an over used word...but profound seems to fit this perfectly. You can put me on the " I like " side.
Very, very well done
Anxiously awaiting more
Larry
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 04:54:32 PM AEST
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Thanks for your comments on my poems. I
loved your poem sprinkled with liberal doses
of disturbing imagery and written from a
place of pain. I liked the fourth line the best
while it was rather short I think the shortness
in this case added to the poem. Hope to see
a lot more by you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:24:21 PM AEST
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| nothing about this is less than perfect. |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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| Absolutely amazing. Your poems capture the reader, can't wait for more to come! |
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Re: Blood Stain Tears
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:40:49 AM AEST
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so much pain and raw emotions intense.
take care |
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