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Silence (edited)
Contributed by
eternalnight4x
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:22:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sound is incarcerated within my mouth.
Words are taboo to my lips.
All is restrained within my depths,
as I lie idle to the world.
Sounds to which you are deaf
I am able to hear
All to which you are blind,
I own glasses to see
That to which you are oblivious
Is so clear to me
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2005-02-07 07:22:50]
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Re: Silence (edited)
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by Kachina on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:41:19 AM AEST
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| Nice work. |
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Re: Silence (edited)
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:59:40 AM AEST
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| Deep and vivid, excellent poem |
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Re: Silence (edited)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:57:06 AM AEST
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an interesting analogy...
excellent use of metaphoric descriptions...
-thought provoking |
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Re: Silence (edited)
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by remote on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 03:12:48 PM AEST
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| I quite liked both the versions. Good job. |
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