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innocence lost
Contributed by
bruised_angel
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:28:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Dont ask me
the inprints and colours tell you
just look closer and you'll see
How the green eyed monster
can turn into the red raged bull
left me with the marks
played mind games to the full
How a cold cool tear
can turn into a warm dark drip
tried to run
but he kept his grip
How beaten to the limit
can turn innocence to kill
i pushed
he fell and laid there still
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Re: innocence lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:14:22 AM AEST
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| whoa... amazing.. |
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Re: innocence lost
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by CaddishCut on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 06:12:11 AM AEST
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| Great flow, great imagery, great write! |
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Re: innocence lost
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:31:49 AM AEST
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| Rigid and full on poem, deep and anguished words, Excellent flow, |
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