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Just another day

Contributed by Atari on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:57:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Today is one of those days. You want to get rid of it and push it all behind. He sees you, you see him. But you just walk right by him. Everyday it's all the same. It's just another one of those days. You wish he was yours yet all you can do is dream. Dream to be seen in his arms. Dream that he can be yours. A sweet and satisfying dream that will never be. Or shall it be? Who knows but someone wins and someone looses. It's not like you choose this. Another time he's caught your eye. You can't help but to stare. Then you see him...right in front of the only person who you wish you didn't see. She holds him she kisses him. She is his and he is hers. Yet out of the corner of your eye you see him frown and see her smile that I have been let down from sight once again. I can not be friend those who don't defend the rights of us all. So I shall deepen my thoughts deepen my feelings from the world and become one black whole of sadness once again. I love him yet he does not love me.
The next day he looks your way. He asks for you to stay. Then she comes my way. I must leave so I retrieve into the darkness that I still feed. Until that time that I wait for her to leave then I shall come to see you again. But until then I shall sit and wait for yet another date for us to be.
Now there's another guy, who does not shy. She comes his way and he comes mine. I have found the one guy to be mine. I shall not forget you no not ever. But this one looks like forever.
Ariane Brooks

Copyright © Atari ... [ 2005-02-07 01:57:10]
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Re: Just another day (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:18:49 PM AEST
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i wasnt going to read this one because i thought it was too long
but im glad i did. its a real good write

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