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god, i love it
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:40:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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god, i love it
the smell of the burning
it tickles my nose
it fills me with a stong urning
god, i love it
thae taste so good
the sticky feeling in my throught
i would discribe it if i could
god, i love it
the trip of my mind
the thoughts rush through my head
but, there thoughts so devine
god i love it
but for now i must say "fare well"
but some day we will meet again
and gone will be my hell
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nightwolf
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2005-02-07 01:40:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: god, i love it
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:13:40 AM AEST (User
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Vivid descriptions, cool flow and excellent words. |
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Re: god, i love it
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:04:04 PM AEST (User
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Vivid and deep. It flowed well and it was very good.
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