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Fury Embrace
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:18:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ira
"Anger: an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured." -Seneca quotes
I spurn love and fury embrace
blackened emotion manifested inside
heart steaming, a scowl chiseled to my face
there is no shadows for you to hide
your cowardice: a pitiful disgrace
my angst will not be denied
no pastels and pretty lace
no matter how many tears cried
no forgiveness will I embrace
hatered is my guide
Unleashing rage if you cross my path
Irritation is my shadow
and you will feel my wrath
My anger I shall never lose
for it has coiled around my soul
everyone must pay their dues
revenge is my goal!
My punishment?
dismemberment alive
will just breed more anger
I my die, but my hatred will survive
Anger...
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by nightwolf on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:21:12 AM AEST
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its a good write and a good read
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:44:37 AM AEST
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This second one is a good improvement! I felt the anger, I was caught in feeling the emotion. Good job Sweet One!
Love ya!
~Sweetness~ |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:59:33 AM AEST
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Ohh I liked this more and more each time I read the first 2 poems, the more you read it the more you understand. Incredible write Joce cant wait to read the rest of the series.
Jane x |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:26:58 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem, yet a sad testiment 2 love,
who ever has hurt u has lost more than u, 4
they have lost them selves . . . sorry 4 your
pain . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:12:49 AM AEST
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| Deep words, raw emotions felt, excellent poem. |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by pixie on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:22:26 PM AEST
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just as good as the first one, anger is my deadliest sin , I think you expressed it well,
*hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:46:58 PM AEST
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Holy crap this was just so awesome and so
poetic.
"Irritation is my shadow"
That was my favourite line, but the whole
poem was just filled with such intensity and
yeah... wow. I will shut up and go read this
amazingly... amazing poem again.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:33:43 PM AEST
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| I don't know what to say..because anger is one problem I have.. among many.. If I wrote dark poetry..well I don't because that side of me would just take over.. my anger will spill out and.. anyway.. hugs..tight and long.. |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 02:39:56 PM AEST
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Yipes!!!!!! Anger well depicted!!
You nailed it J !!! |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:26:05 PM AEST
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I can't wait to see them all,
this is cool!
--Ghosty |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:27:31 PM AEST
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I love your style!!
I mean, really. These poems have swept me off my feet.
Just brilliant. You portray the sins well.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Fury Embrace
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by freckle on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:36:22 PM AEST
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| Oh but these are wonderful reads! You are capturing so well, the essence of each one...I'm on to three now.. |
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