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I cry out my pleas.
Contributed by
jmakuer
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:48:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For comfort and trust have I wept
For love and friendship that did end
For friends that I promised and never kept
I am left all alone and broken heart
My friends have all gone apart And the
burning fire inside me continues to last
my mistakes are haunting me every where
I turn, it seems like a punishment is to be
Through bitter tears I cry out my pleas
But still that won’t have my love pleased
my mind is contemplating and hoping to
be forgiven. and my heart is burning and
awaits for a second chance to be given
Being alone and sad got me traumatized
Through my burning tears I was baptized
Left all my sins and cruel intentions a side
I have accepted the truth
That things will never be the same
I'm not sure what to do
I only have myself to blame
Copyright ©
jmakuer
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2005-02-06 23:48:16]
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Re: I cry out my pleas.
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:31:02 AM AEST
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THAT BITES! I HOPE THE NEXT LOVE OF YOURS TO BE IS JUST AS NICE AS YOU WROTE THIS!!GOOD LUCK MY FRIEND & DO CARRY ON!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: I cry out my pleas.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:27:05 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Everyone in my opionion, deserves a second chance.
huggs,
emy |
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