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suicide
Contributed by
wrath_of_inferno
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:34:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The stool beneath my feet
The noose tied tight
As the stool slips away
I hear the twang of the rope
And all is silent
And I am asleep
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Re: suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:42:02 PM AEST (User
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Its Ok, not the greatest not the worst...
Write another one...
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Re: suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by CaddishCut on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:53:20 PM AEST (User
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I really liked this one. Short, sweet, and to the point. |
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