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my mind
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:27:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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the pain that destroys
the weakness inside
not able to see
the longing to die
the light thats hurning
all around
i hide my eyes
from brightness and sound
vocies hit
light trigers the nerves
the pain inside
the migrains return
the burning stomach
consious sound
everything starting
to spin around
i want to lie down
get otta the light
run away
from everything insite
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Re: my mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:18:51 PM AEST
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| interesting poem...honestly i dont really understand it but it goes well... |
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Re: my mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:08:39 AM AEST
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the pain that destroys
the weakness inside
not able to see
the longing to die
nice...good size, okays on form, overall not bad, keep it up...
Auryn
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