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Bloodletting

Contributed by cocacola1331 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:49:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The air is thick with a misty haze
A calming atmosphere
Warmth
Smelling of freesia and gardenias,
Rhythmic pounding of the water
Thumping into the tub
Rhythmic pounding
Rhythmic pounding
Rhythmic pounding
Into the tub
Onto her back,
Her slick body

She traces her arms with the
Tips of her fingers
So gently
Tenderly

Rhythmic pounding

Touching her soft wrists
Careful to mark the spot

Grasping the deep blue razor
Selected carefully from the
Closet just moments before,
She etches the blade
Into her skin

Rhythmic pounding
Rhythmic pounding

She grits her teeth,
The hot water swishing
Down her back
The blade refusing to part her skin
Harder and harder
She presses
She feels a slight pinch in her skin,
Her fingers turning numb

A small speck of blood beads together
Crimson and bright
Against her pale flesh
A smile curves onto her lips,
Tugging at each corners
Finally, results
Results
Results

She presses her finger
Onto her tiny wound
Wiping the blood away

The blood stretches out across
Her wrist once more
So beautifully expected

Rhythmic pounding

She resumes her shower
With a new found glee,
Her problems trickled
Away.

Copyright © cocacola1331 ... [ 2005-02-06 21:49:56]
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Re: Bloodletting (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:58:44 PM AEST
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I don't condone suicide but that was a good write. It had me nervous all the way.check out mine.

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