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Untitled
Contributed by
freckle
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:15:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come sit and stay awhile
Shall we have a cup of tea
How nice in this quiet time
That you should visit me
I’m sorry I don’t keep in touch
But how I miss you so
The memories of the times we’ve had
On days like this - they flow
You haven’t aged at all
And it seems with each new year
Instead of drifting further
You just seem to get more dear
Excuse the messy house please
And how long will you stay
My family is returning soon
But please, don’t go away
It’s nice to know on days like this
On you I can rely
But though I must get back to work
Dear dream - don’t go - I’ll cry.
Carol Sossaman
November 20,1988
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2005-02-06 21:15:52]
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Re: Untitled
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:22:17 PM AEST
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Loved this.....Nice twist..
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Re: Untitled
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:24:57 PM AEST
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| Yes indeed very good twist had me in suspense all the way. Will you read mine called Gene and Lucy Birdsong.? |
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Re: Untitled
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:05:15 PM AEST
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great poem... loved it!
hope to c more from u soon
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:34:33 AM AEST
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| You are a truly talented poet..... I truly admire your work.... Great piece of poetry! |
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Re: Untitled
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by bernard on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:58:25 AM AEST
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| Life is just one big dream with a few nightmares thrown in to keep us from getting to happy- Great poem though with an unusual ending.bernard |
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Re: Untitled
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:18:51 PM AEST
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Nice.
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Re: Untitled
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:55:50 PM AEST
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this is a great poem. i loved the twist.
please read my poem "keep going"
and tell me whats wrong with it thank you
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