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I am Free
Contributed by
daydreamer22
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:46:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Lost inside my mind
Heartless and cold
No way out
Trapped in my thoughts
Hurt and bleeding
Can't escape
Consumed by feelings
Fearing and lonely
Cornered in the dark
Time to end it for good
Find the way out
Escape
Get away from the dark corner
On the edge now
Ready to jump
Falling to my death
My body lying motionless
People rush to my side
It is too late
What's done is done
I am free...
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daydreamer22
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2005-02-06 20:46:18]
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Re: I am Free
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by OnAngelswings on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:50:53 PM AEST
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| I hope this isn't real...nothing is worth that...you have so much to offer....Good writting...Shari |
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Re: I am Free
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:04:41 PM AEST
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| You make it seem so real with your words. Keep up the good writing I want to read more. |
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Re: I am Free
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:29:51 PM AEST
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well written...would like to read more...one question do you really think death would free you ?
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Re: I am Free
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by Accusurfer on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:01:14 PM AEST
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| I'm free too - from a different perspective. Interesting poem you have here. |
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