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Tanka
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:39:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Gliding tree from tree,
Flying squirrel to his hole,
Bobbing in and out,
Chasing off the woodpecker,
Over and over they played.
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Re: Tanka
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by lilschizoboy07 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:25:39 PM AEST
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| If there were squirrels in Japan, I'd swear you were Japanese. But for all I know, you could still be of Japanes descent:). |
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Re: Tanka
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:33:54 PM AEST
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Great one, Wes.....
Enjoyed this...
Jenni |
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Re: Tanka
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:01:44 AM AEST
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I prefer Tankas to Haikus, they are more demonstrative, and allow for a greater range of expression because of their length.
I enjoyed this one.
Very descriptive. |
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Re: Tanka
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by sammydid on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:02:49 PM AEST
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amazing! i love squirrels and woodpeckers!
yet this is the first time they have ever seemed so dimensional. |
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