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Rainy Day Thoughts
Contributed by
freckle
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:21:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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RAINY DAY THOUGHTS
The sky today reminds me of —
a gothic book from yesteryear
where out upon the Scottish moores
a damsel weeps
Her heart, her dreams, lay shattered
as the grass beneath her feet
Too late she learned that love
can slip into the mist
Leaving behind a world where
sorrow blooms
“Come hide me mist” she cries
with heaving breast
Let me escape to where
love lives.
Carol Sossaman
Jan.5,1990
Copyright ©
freckle
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2005-02-06 20:21:15]
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Re: Rainy Day Thoughts
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:07:39 PM AEST
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Nice poem. I really like this. I can relate, I bet alot of people can too heh.
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Re: Rainy Day Thoughts
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:20:24 PM AEST
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| Nice write do you have any recent ones I'd like to read more? |
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Re: Rainy Day Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:32:35 AM AEST
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| Wow.... I do not know what else to say but.... Wow! |
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Re: Rainy Day Thoughts
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:41:11 PM AEST
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This had some very poetic thoughts in it.....I love it.
well done
Roses
Larry |
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