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Walk Softly
Contributed by
freckle
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:16:25 PM in AEST
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WALK SOFTLY
Walk softly down the corridors
The pathways of my mind
So gently nudge the memories
Blow off the dust of time
Within your heart, set free your love
To understand and see
The memories here, emotions too
Are all a part of me
Step lightly on my feelings
Observe them each with care
And as you leave, remember
To you, my soul, I bare......
Carol L.Hunter
Oct.16,1985
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Re: Walk Softly
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by catz77 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:20:29 PM AEST
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wow this is a good poem to open up any poetry book with
you bring out what you mean so clearly
and i like it
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Re: Walk Softly
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:22:21 PM AEST
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| Wow very good how many do you have enough for a book yet? |
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Re: Walk Softly
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by freckle on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:26:26 PM AEST
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| Maybe, not sure how many it really takes to make a good book...thanks! |
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Re: Walk Softly
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:28:57 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful opening poem.... It says a great deal.
Good luck with your book..
Jenni |
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Re: Walk Softly
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:31:03 AM AEST
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| A truly beautiful poem to open a book with.... Loved it! |
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Re: Walk Softly
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by fuzzywuzzy on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:19:18 AM AEST
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Isn't it hard to bare your soul..this kind of reminds me of He Wishes For The Cloths Of Heaven..
Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths,
Enwrought with golden and silver light,
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
Of night and light and the half-light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet:
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly, because you tread on my dreams.
-- William Butler Yeats
I don't know why exactly... |
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