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Beyond what i can see . . .
Contributed by
catz77
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 07:56:27 PM in AEST
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Beyond what I can see
Is a world full of belief
Beyond what I can see
Is a world of truth
Beyond what I can see
Is a world full of trust
A world that does not exist
Is beyond what I can see
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Re: Beyond what i can see . . .
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by vanilla_flame on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:01:23 PM AEST
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thats pretty good, maybe you should make it longer
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Re: Beyond what i can see . . .
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by GregoryGreen04 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:23:08 PM AEST
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| I like the poem. However, it might now hurt to elaborate some. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Beyond what i can see . . .
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by GregoryGreen04 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:24:47 PM AEST
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