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My dream
Contributed by
jjones12
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:50:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm just sitting here thinking about my life,
Then you said please hold at your hand,
and lets exchang goldin bands,
because i want you in my life,
i want you to be my wife,
Then My dream endded and as i sit here thinking of you,
Thinking about the weird things we use to do,
all of the old times when "sex" wasn't cool,
now I feel like a fool,
Because your not who i thought,
if we wouldn't of fought,
we would still be together,
and everything would be better,
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jjones12
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2005-02-06 18:50:41]
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Re: My dream
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:57:21 PM AEST
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| Nice little poem here. I totally relate to the subject matter here, and I can only tell myself that fights are sumtimes necessary, cause if u dont fight all that time, you would b blind 2 problems that havent surfaced yet. It's nice that a poem made me consider things about myself like yours did. Again, easy to relate to, great write |
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Re: My dream
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:07:15 AM AEST
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I THINK YOU'RE TRYING TO SAY HOW MUCH YOU REGRET A BIG MISTAKE YOU'VE MADE!ALWAYS REMEMBER WHAT F.A.I.T.H. REALLY MEANS! Faith Always Is Tomorrow's Hope!!IF YOU REALLY HAD A DREAM,IT NEVER DIED-IT JUST MIGHT BE OUT OF REACH AT THE TIME!!!ALOT OF HEART IN THIS,YOU'VE GOTTA STILL HAVE ENUFF LEFT TO FIND TRUE LOVE ONCE AGAIN!!!!I WISH YOU WELL!!!!!
DAN!!!!!! |
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