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Lost Love
Contributed by
Val
on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Have you ever heard the sang,
You never really know what you had.
Until you’ve lost it,
Well, it’s true and now I’m sad.
Not too long ago,
There was someone.
He made me so happy,
I loved him a ton.
Then I did something stupid,
I made a bad choice.
It was all over,
Just at the sound of my voice.
I thought I had found better,
Thought it just seemed.
That all I had thought,
I had just dreamed.
For there was no one better,
He was the one.
I had lost somebody special,
And it was not fun!
You don’t know,
The pain I went through.
I wanted it all to go away,
I just wished it wasn’t true.
I want it all back,
I want it, I do.
I promised I’ll love you,
My promise is true.
I’ve though about everything,
And I love you still.
I love you,
And I always will.
Copyright ©
Val
... [
2002-12-10 04:30:00]
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Re: Lost Love
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by Shattered_Angel on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:25:07 PM AEST
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| Its really goo. simple and to the point. I enjoyed the reading, and hope to see more work. |
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Re: Lost Love
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 01:49:02 AM AEST
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| I think your poem was good. |
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