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The Girl
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:23:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like a leaf falling from a tree
I am left with a tear inside me
Growing farther away
From some sacred, glowing hope
Shaken badly by a break at the knees
There's a piece of my soul that just flees
Every time it's her face
Always haunting my heart as it beats
See the smile as it sparkles with glee
It is not what it appears to be
I'll hide my truth from her
And she'll never know that she's a dream
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Re: The Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by noone on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:39:23 PM AEST (User
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This is a very emotional poem. You have portrayed your feelings brilliantly! I love this poem, although it is short it really captures the moment, definetly one of my favourites!!
'Like a leaf falling from a tree I am left with a tear inside me.'
I like that bit,lol. Keep up the good work,Love 'n hugs,
Kirsty xx |
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