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Moonlight Destiny
Contributed by
Phantomdream
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:21:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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A field of mournful followers,
a line of bobbing grass,
a sky of the moon's blazing heat,
a starlit moonlight destiny.
A blissful day of peace,
an enchanted moment of silence,
a dark second of lonely night,
an amazing moonlight destiny.
A dance between betrayed lovers,
a moment of tragic mirth,
a loss of painful memories,
a silent moonlight destiny.
Moonlight destiny,
my prereckoned fate,
why have you brought me to this place,
why have you abandoned me to ominous fate?
Moonlight destiny,
soaring in the breeze,
i'll find you someday,
my hiding moonlight destiny.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-02-06 16:21:33]
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Re: Moonlight Destiny
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:26:19 PM AEST
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| very poetic. lol for sum reason i have the urge 2 dance now...(???)but thats another story. I like how you weaved all your thoughts and tied them together with the title of your poem. Beautiful piece of work |
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Re: Moonlight Destiny
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:55:05 PM AEST
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dancing in the shadows of moonlight on a hot summers night I loved this one also very romantic nice images so veryyyyy vivid!
Michelle |
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Re: Moonlight Destiny
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:14:21 PM AEST
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a moment of tragic mirth,
a loss of painful memories,
this seems so very sad... |
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