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Angel Eyes
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:55:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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her angel eyes cry and spill tears and lies
her angel eyes dont shine
like they used to once
people pass by
watch this angel baby cry
they watch her fall and dont care to ask why
shes dying slow and in pain
to know her thoughts would drive you in sane
this angel baby weeps
and her tears stain the sheets
you couldnt comprehend
all of the pain she is in
her angel eyes weep
from the secrets that they keep
her soft angel face
would put you in your place
if only her sweet angel eyes
would never have to cry
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Re: Angel Eyes
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by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:01:26 PM AEST
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Amazing, such depression. I feel like this more often than not. Nice write.
::Elizabeth:: |
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Re: Angel Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:32:03 PM AEST
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| Such a sad write, but there's so much emotion behind it. It's really good. Great job. |
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Re: Angel Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:35:53 PM AEST
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| wow, this is a very powerful poem, Its very good!!! I really like it ~ |
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Re: Angel Eyes
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:31:33 AM AEST
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THAT HITS YOU RIGHT IN THE HEART RIGHT AWAY!SAD BUT SO DESCRIPTIVE & FELT BY THOSE WHO CAN READ BETWEEN THE LINES!!IN A WAY IT FEELS KIND OF MAGICAL THE WAY IT HITS YOU WHEN READING IT!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Angel Eyes
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by humboldthunny17 on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:58:52 PM AEST
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*crying* stars, u put soo much emotion into these poems, it almost makes me jealous. i wish those angel eyes were tearless also
luv ya, ceb |
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