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Bleed
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:23:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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shes shaking
reaching for her blade
to take her
take her away from pain
shes crying
remembering good times
now dying
shes lost in her mind
shes bleeding
trying to ease her pain
shes faint
with only herself to blame
shes lost inside
thoughts spilling through her blade
she cant feel anything
she needs this to unwind
shes torn
with nothing to lose
she digs in
her blood feels warm
she bleeds
bleeds herself dry
and she whispers
to everyone
goodbye
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2005-02-06 15:23:51]
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Re: Bleed
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by spazie on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:47:10 PM AEST
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i think it is pretty good
well done |
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Re: Bleed
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by crazylady on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:58:33 PM AEST
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wow great write. thats how i feel. i can relate. its hard to stop but its worth it. when you feel like letting go dont. thats what they want you to do. they want to push you to the edge and make u give up. prove them wrong.and shove it in their faces. all in all great write. writing helps alot for me. if u need someone to talk to pm me. good write! god bless!
-cec |
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Re: Bleed
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by Phantomdream on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:59:21 PM AEST
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| It's okay...a little bit too choppy, I think |
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Re: Bleed
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by thecutter on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:33:55 PM AEST
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| great poem. stay free. |
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Re: Bleed
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by humboldthunny17 on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:55:21 PM AEST
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mad, i hope u never bleed urself dry...
this is a good write, but it makes me very sad--i can't do anything!
--luv ya, ceb |
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