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Sparkle
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:01:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can see the sparkle in your eyes,
I know we’ll never be saying our goodbyes,
You have such warmth it can always be felt,
Every time I look at you my heart begins to melt.
You make me feel all giggly inside,
I know that there’s nothing you would hide,
Your eyes shine like the summer sun,
I know that out on our love you’d never run.
To stare deep into your eyes makes me weep,
As in your heart I know you’ll forever keep,
You & me share a sparkly, fiery love,
We fit together like a beautiful heart shaped glove.
When we are together amazing things unfold,
Our love is worth more than an ounce of gold,
I can feel fireworks going off inside my mind,
They are so strong they can cause me to go blind.
The sparkle in your eyes will never fade,
They shine brighter than a freshly sharpened blade,
I fall under a spell when I stare deep into you,
Looking so very deep I can see your love so true.
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pixie
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2005-02-06 15:01:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sparkle
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:09:27 PM AEST (User
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Aww this is so sweet, every line was perfect and i so love the way it all ended.
Outstanding work Kriss.
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Re: Sparkle
(User Rating: 1 ) by subchild on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:27:41 PM AEST (User
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This is really so great pixie..Beautiful. |
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Re: Sparkle
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:30:36 PM AEST (User
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now this is more like it pix, happy in love again . . . beautiful poem . . .
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Re: Sparkle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:09:57 PM AEST (User
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Aww this is really beautiful and sweet. I love this. I hope things get better for you.
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Re: Sparkle
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:55:04 PM AEST (User
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It's as much fun reading the warm, loving comments on your poems as it is reading your poetry..great job as always..pixilator..:-) |
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