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But Not Today
Contributed by
misspurpledlw
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:32:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Several times a day I tell myself,
This is so very hard,
You may get hurt, and I say
Now just walk away.
Several times a day I tell myself,
You have opened your heart,
You are risking so much, and I say
Now just walk away.
Several times a day I tell myself,
You are not strong enough for this,
He can’t really care, and I say
Now just walk away.
Several times a day I tell myself,
Live for today, but thoughts intrude
Of the pain that may come and I say
Now just walk away.
Several times a day, I read his words
I hear his voice in my head,
I feel the touch of his lips and hands
And I say, but not today
Today I stay
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2005-02-06 10:32:12]
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Re: But Not Today
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:36:08 AM AEST
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| This is interesting to me in that it denotes moments and times in which certain feelings appear and then fade. I too have moments which feel similar. I like this because it gives an accurate description of all those little times put together in one poem. Blessings. |
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Re: But Not Today
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by whispered_cries on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:05:51 AM AEST
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| I like it, it is something that everyone can relate to and that's why i like it so much. Good write keep it up. |
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Re: But Not Today
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by Accusurfer on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:19:30 AM AEST
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| Sad. Guess she finally walked away. Makes me wonder why I wasn't paying attention. Anyway, this provoked much thought. Thanks. |
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Re: But Not Today
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:25:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Really beautiful. I love this.
Scott |
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