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It's Over Now
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:41:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lying in a puddle of your own blood
I turn my back and walk away
Its over now I can breathe again
But you won’t see another day
The rage I held inside was boiling
You put it there and I took it out
I took my knife and sharpened the blade
I had to kill you there was no doubt
You never expected it to come back to you
But let me tell you revenge is sweet
You broke me into so many pieces
So it was your end that you had to meet
One single tear rolled down my cheek
But I felt no sadness deep inside
It was because I could finally be free
No longer did I have to hide
Before you closed your eyes forever
I kissed your lips one final time
Then I whispered in your bloody ear
“Loving you was my only crime”
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CrimsonTears
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2005-02-06 01:41:52]
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Re: It's Over Now
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 07:50:16 AM AEST
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| Wonderfully wrapped..:-) venkat |
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Re: It's Over Now
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by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:15:25 PM AEST
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Nicely done. =)
::Elizabeth:: |
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Re: It's Over Now
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by arden on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:29:55 AM AEST
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Before you closed your eyes forever
I kissed your lips one final time
Then I whispered in your bloody ear
“Loving you was my only crime”
i loved that.
beautiful poem. very deep and moving.
nicely written. great work.
Arden |
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Re: It's Over Now
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:37:23 AM AEST
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Great form and flow!!!
The imagery was wonderful too.
And I loved the ending, nice touch!! |
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Re: It's Over Now
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
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I wrote a poem called Crimson Tears. I had to stop here when I saw your name -
full vivd write here. Glad that I came across it.
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