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Wait
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:37:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I can't
Wait
Any longer
I want you
Now
I can't
Wait
Another day
I need you
Now
Sick and tired
Of waiting...
Waiting
For our changing
I know it
Will never come
I just needed
someone
To take some
Time
To understand
Me
Not someone
over rated
Not someone
wealthy
It doesnt matter
to me
I just don't
want to
wait
another day
Waiting
For you
To change
You're mind
Face down
suicide
No one around
Died
Ended his life
Because of
Lies
Half *** trys and
Unheard cries
He did'nt want
To Wait...
Face down
On a suicide
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-05 22:37:15]
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Re: Wait
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:50:40 PM AEST
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| this was incredible clark. bloody amazing. reminds me so much of one of my favorite bands, staind. i cant wait till you next post =] |
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Re: Wait
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by subchild on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:25:29 AM AEST
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| It may not be your best but this is very good..Your flow is top notch as is most of what you do write..Very good. |
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Re: Wait
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 06:31:47 PM AEST
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I loved it..I want to write one now and use the word hesitating..You've inspired me..to steal maybe..to plagerize..
tired of all the waiting..
tired of your hesitating...
is that stealing?? |
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