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I CARE
Contributed by
gunda
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:11:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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When those days of sorrow get you
And you struggle all alone
When no one is there to hold you
No one sees what`s going one
When I should be there
But live too far away
Remember, that in your mind
You find the strength you need
And in my heart you stay alive
I will do what I can to help you
And share my strength with you
So if you just remember
That I am always here
And I will always care
You might find the strength and comfort
You need to stay alive
Copyright ©
gunda
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2005-02-05 21:11:46]
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Re: I CARE
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:16:24 PM AEST
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Great Write!!
=Jen= |
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Re: I CARE
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST
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| good write, but I don't know if you were in a hurry or what, but your spelling is a little off in both stanzas and the description... sorry if I sound too negative, this poem is very good |
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Re: I CARE
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:11:07 PM AEST
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Very good poem...shows what a caring person you are. If you need help with your spelling I would suggest you click yes to spell check when submitting.
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni |
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