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lost
Contributed by
karmen
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:09:20 PM in AEST
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There is a man,
who walks day and night,
up and down this street.
What he's searching for is unknown,
but its something.
This man is so dark,
yet, looking so afraid.
I believe he is lost,
looking for a way home.
No one cares about him,
they just point and laugh,
and children stare.
Tears roll down his face,
showing he does carry emotion.
Never does he sit,
and never does he stop,
pacing back and forth.
This mans story is untold.
His life and secrets,
lay deep within.
Lost in his mind,
and no way out, maybe.
No one knows what he is looking for,
but you see, by the glare in his eyes,
he is here, lost.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-02-05 21:09:20]
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Re: lost
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:30:11 PM AEST
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Your authors note asks for comments...but your writing skills demand them.
I could see this man wandering..lost and alone.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: lost
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:28:00 PM AEST
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| this brought an ache to my heart for the man ..i could see him. You write so vividly..so well. |
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Re: lost
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by catz77 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:00:03 PM AEST
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this poem deserves comments.
I cold visualize this man wondering
and lost . . .
very well written poem
elizabeth (catz77) |
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Re: lost
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by darkknight88 on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 01:26:45 AM AEST
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| yes very well written, im lost myself and i can sympathise with the man in the poem i know what its like to loose my way and never find it. Good work!! (be sure to read some of mine even though their second rate!! |
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