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How Far I'll Fall
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:05:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everytime I turn away
Something
Burns deep inside
Greaving me to stay
I don't know
How far
I'll fall
If I walk away
I can not say
What I need to
Today
I want to
Walk away
But...
I don't know
How far
I'll fall
If I stay
You push at me
You scream at me
You tear at me
But..
You hug me
You kiss me
You said
You love me
I want to make things right
I don't want to screw things up
But I don't know what to do
I love you too
But I can't be with you
But I can't leave you
I guess I'll fail
No matter what
But how far
Do I want
To fall
Fall
In
Love
With you my beautiful
Dove
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ForeverAlone
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2005-02-05 21:05:43]
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Re: How Far I'll Fall
(User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_4_eternity on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:26:26 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! It's one of the best I've read today, wow, I can't believe barely anyone had read it, this is a wonderful poem and I have no critisizm (spelt it wrong, I know=)) |
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Re: How Far I'll Fall
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:58:03 PM AEST
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| this would make a better song than a poem because of your repeating the same words at the end of each line. poems dont normally do that. but i thought it would make a better song just because of the rhythym in my head. seems like everyone can write songlike things except me, and im the one that has the guitar and piano, lol. |
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Re: How Far I'll Fall
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:30:59 PM AEST
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| I read e-9s comment and it made me smile..I love to try and write lryics but can't write music..sigh..I thought this quite melodic too.. |
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Re: How Far I'll Fall
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by subchild on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:33:33 PM AEST
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| What does not make you smile you freak...Not to you foreverealone..I liked this here quite alot..Good feeling flow you had gigging here.. |
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Re: How Far I'll Fall
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by CurtisC on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:29:56 AM AEST
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great job! that's a question that so many people ask themself, the harder you fall the more it hurts....
Curtis |
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