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No Longer Beautiful
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 07:55:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No Longer Beautiful
I lay in the sea
Of blue and green
I'm covering myself
To suffocate the feelings felt
I lay in the sea of misery
Drowning unable to breathe
The darkness takes you
Down too far for me to get to
So far away
Is the end to pain
So near to me
Is misery
The oceans separate
And feelings no longer reciprocate
Oceans drown emotions
But I drowned you
In the sea of beauty
And reciprocated misery
Unable to get to you
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2005-02-05 19:55:42]
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Re: No Longer Beautiful
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:00:03 PM AEST
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| aww... such a sad poem here but so beautiful. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: No Longer Beautiful
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by subchild on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:01:43 PM AEST
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| Beautiful post I really felt it here. |
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Re: No Longer Beautiful
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:22:14 PM AEST
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| Damn.....I love this poem...I really can't find the words to tell you how close to home this is for me.... |
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Re: No Longer Beautiful
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by Kachina on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:49:57 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. The way you used the ocean to describe your feelings is good. |
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Re: No Longer Beautiful
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:35:44 PM AEST
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| I can feel that feeling of being no longer able to breathe..beautiful write.. |
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