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The Candle's Flame Died
Contributed by
Ataraxia
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 06:33:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You wish you could take back the pain, everything
The remorse you felt for one moment
And now the next you love me
I can’t press rewind, life doesn’t work that way
I just can’t forgive you
Because you could change your mind at any time
You lift me up only to drop me onto concrete
Then you push me down
Before I have time to get back on my feet
Let’s face it, we will never make ends meet
I can’t handle anymore of this
Pressure raining down on me
So get out of my head, you’re already out of my heart
There’s no room for you in this endless vastness
I wish you hadn’t said those words that hurt us both
I wish you had said “I’m sorry”
After you were finished screaming
The candle’s flame died, the book is read
The paper’s crumbled, we can’t go back again
You can’t turn back time, no matter what you said
The candle’s flame died, the book is read
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Ataraxia
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2005-02-05 18:33:44]
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Re: The Candle's Flame Died
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 06:55:08 PM AEST
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Excellent metaphors...Sad write but well done..
Jenni |
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Re: The Candle's Flame Died
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:33:30 AM AEST
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The candle’s flame died, the book is read
The paper’s crumbled, we can’t go back again
You can’t turn back time, no matter what you said
The candle’s flame died, the book is read
Excellent loved the words
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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