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Confusion
Contributed by
acr975
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Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
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I have so much to lose
What am I willing to sacrifice?
Won't you have regrets about taking away life?
The potential never reached,
The happiness the child will never seek.
The laughter which will never echo in my mind
The tears I will never see
The kiss you will never feel
The memories which will never exist.
The ultimate punishment for a soul
to suffer for our mistake,
For what happened while we were weak.
Copyright © 2002 Angela Rivas
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2002-12-10 01:00:00]
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Re: Confusion
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:12:20 AM AEST
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This is sad, it's hard when one is confused about things...hope things get better for you....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot, it gives one alot to think about...
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Re: Confusion
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:19:50 PM AEST
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| its sad but I think that its very deep. I can relate. Being confused really sucks. But think it'll go away. Nicely written by the way. |
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Re: Confusion
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:58:20 AM AEST
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I liked this so much i do hope to hear more of your poems soon!
Always
=Amy |
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Re: Confusion
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by kolbrun on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:30:57 PM AEST
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lovely poem.......
yours Kolbrún |
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